Monday, October 15, 2012

academic shoot

lines-

i think i followed the rule okay.
the subject is the lines on the flag
not really
i could have balanced it


simplicity-


a little.
the drawing on the white background
yes
zoomed in a little more



rule of Thirds-


i think i got it really  good.
the hand and pencil in the bottom left corner
maybe a little
made it more clear.


balance-

good
the hands
yes
maybe take it facing the front of hands



Framing-
good
the students
yes
i could have had more people to fill it up more.



avoid mergers-

not so good
the hand and wrist
no
try not to get the sleeve with the black table.


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